Game is fine.
Truth is, looks like some nice work went into this, and I think the plot is great. Doing some work for nothing in the end ('cept medals).
I do agree on the bee, though, and I also think there should be a check point in more places, even though the game isn't really that long. I encourage you to do more like this, but maybe a bit longer, eh? (:
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