Sweet!
I think it needs more sound, though. EVERYTHING is there, otherwise. Maybe try out something with a saw? A little more to the beat? I wouldn't know, it's your track, broseph.
But everything with the notes is perfect. I'm sure this can be an easily liked track. Keep it up! 9/10, and I'll give you a 5/5.
Glad You liked It!
and ill look into maybe adding a little more - maybe like a pad or gated synth- something to fill those spaces- thanks for the tip dude!
Ohey there, shades.
Always nice to see you uploading! I guess you can consider me a fan of 'em.
A unique piece of work. I don't exactly know what it's about, but hey, as long as the sound is good, and it is. What I would like in this, though, is a bit more of an intro. I feel everything is kinda coming on a bit too fast, but thats about it for me. Excellent job!
10/10 5/5
Thanks so much for you support!
I didn't want to draw out the into too much because each repeating musical segment since the song is made of 1 measure note patterns. It would be too repetitive if i dragged the intro too much. I kinda wanted to get from the initial rolling pattern to the other one.. put them together, then switch straight to the new pattern. The song was designed to carry the vocal elements, even though it kinda sound like they were put on top. (has to do with the narrow freq range of the voice actors).
Anyway... the song is a response to, and slight parody of, a song made by some other guy. Called "Rainbow Dash Likes Girls"
Rainbow Dash being a character from My Little Pony. The fanbase loves music, and there are a few of us who like to do it so yeah.
Also... don't laugh... FiM is an epic show of epic proportions.
Here it comes...
Just watch this get in a top 5.
Heh, nice stuff again, Jess. Defiantly felt some motion going on in this track, with what that orch hit and such. I mean, not really much more to say, your tracks always leave me speachless. Nothing really to look onto considering it's all just so perfect-o. Keep it up, man, as always! <3 5/5 10/10
Thanks so much man!! You are awesome.
doupdoo
/Title was just to put a title.
Now I like this. Has a bit of progression to it, as well as a lot of things to keep you enlightened as it continues. The piano at the beginning and towards the end was great, and in my opinion was one of the best parts. But my favorite part came at 1:37, when you had that slow, noise sweep. Just went smoothly with the whole part, to me. I'll go ahead and give you a 10/10 and 5/5.
One other thing; This sounds awfully familiar, are you inspired by any artists?
Well, I started off years ago listening to SGX (Super Green X)
Which is why most of my older songs are all piano based.
But now I'm way more electro, and you can hear the influence of Deadmau5 in my synths.
Thanks for the review man!
-sadface
<3~
Very catchy tune. DEFIANTLY worth time to just sit down and listen to it yourself. Well at least, in my opinion. I always seem soothed by the smallest things.
Loved the drums, the lead, and the pad/orch or such in the background. I'ma just give it a 9/10 and 5/5. Keep it up. (:
Thanks. :) I've had this riff for over a year, and I had written a full length piano piece featuring it (speaking of which, it's still unnamed). I couldn't figure out how to apply it electronically for sometime, but this is a labor of 2 hours or so of love.
Nice~
Has a well flow to it. Just keeps going, I like it. :D Also love that most of the sounds are things you made and not just presets. Shows that you are great with synths, or well, at least Vanguard.
The only thing I would've liked was maybe a bit more effects on some of the sounds, but then again, I wouldn't really know what to add, so I'm not positive on what I'm actually saying myself here. U: But great job either way. 10/10 5/5 from me. Keep it up. :3
Told you my more recent ones were mastered better ^.^
Gonna upload most of my track's on here as just having newgrounds as a downloader site, but yeah i like getting feedback here too :)
Some effect's could have probably been added through some of these, but i only spent about 10 hours on this song, which is a record low for me, usually i spend 25-50 hours on a song, especially if it has vocal's, so i kinda rushed on this one lol
Ohai there.
Just for DJ Contacreast being in here I'ma give you a 10/10. (He got me into techno/trance, wasn't for him I probably wouldn't ever be making music, probably. <3)
As for the music alone, wasn't really feeling the beat. Like it was there and all, but I felt everything else kinda above it. It was very difficult for me to hear things like the kick until some things like the saw was gone.
But rather then some mixing problems, I would have to say the sound is very lovely. :3 10/10 5/5 Keep making music, man. Supporting you!
Thank you very much for the feedback :)
This song was actually a pretty old song and i definatelly could have mixed it better for sure, my newer song's on youtube are mixed better than the ones i have here though most of them don't have vocal's though i'm hoping to add some to all of them pretty soon, check out my youtube channel to hear some of my much better track's :)
And also I agree @ DJ Contacreast, he's the one who inspired me to make music , never gonna look back on that now after being able to work w/ him :)
Cool~
I found the bass to be quite soothing in this. And the just random school lecture made me giggle. xD
Gave me quite an erotic trip; 5/5 10/10. And I'ma just download it so I can calm myself when I'm gettin' angreh. Thanks, and keep it up.
Thank you! :) I appreciate the download and the kind words.
qjesse
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