HrmDrm.
Clayfacer has been a favorite artist of mine since last year. He has some tutorials on youtube on how to make some things like himself (his youtube name is mmmburgers).
I didn't exactly feel the 'hard' part in this track. You should try to focus a bit more on your beat, and s'more on different parts of a 'hard trance' song, like say the break, buildup, etc.
Keep on trying it, man. I'm sure you can do it. :D 7/10, and I'ma be nice and give you a 5/5. Good luck!